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Hehe, old, mediocre poem of mine:
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The Poem:
You're never right, for only am I.
My dear best friend, why do you lie?
Question my authority, disagree, you should dread, for with my sickled tongue my poison words you'll be fed.
This street is not a two way road, and you're in the way, if we don't see eye to eye, the impalement you will pay.
As the years went on and on, it hasn't been the same, yet we still remained good friends despite my pity games.
I've found others as you have found yours, hence our sodality still remains, do you remember that day we met, I was scorned but yet you saved?
For when you signed my contract in blood with your benevolence, friendship was made.
But now my chain around your neck of my conceit and baloney, rust.
Your tolerance and euphoria is crippled, and like acid corroding through the metal, eats with malice into my clutch.
As my hands begin to bleed, and you fade further away, with my hollow apologies you snarl, the feeling barely tamed.
The wounds in my hands are now deeper, and the trust in you is held by a thread, another chance is given, but in the end our amity will be dead.
Then I'll realize what a friendship we had, one who was there through good, and through bad.
When all the others had gone, you were still there to be, alas, again it has occured, but there is no one now here for me.

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:iconenigmaticpheo:
I love it! The dress is great and the face is beautiful.
:iconchihiro39:
Wow! I love the dress too!! Very awsome! It's sooo dark looking..like Gothic, Love gothicky stuff! Id have to say that the best feautre of this drawing is the dress! The colour just suits it sooo well!! I adore it!

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:iconrwwingsfan19:
very cool drawing.. the dress and face are great!.... the peom has great imagery and is quite good!

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comment, to get comments.
share your kindness, not your hate.
love the art, before yourself.

meditate on this. :ninja:
:iconkespeadooksit:
The poem is awesome. So powerful and such strong emotions. I love the drawing that goes along with it. Makes the piece a whole. An outstanding piece!

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Hey! Check out my :gallery: [link] Leave me a comment and I'll leave you one! :nod:
:iconxeroriskfactor:
great poem, goes very well with the pic,
very strong very firm.
:iconshard-suterusu:
Lovely picture :aww: the atmosphere goes well with it, as well as the poem, it's great :hug:

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:butterfly: :bulletred: :blackrose: :bulletred: :butterfly:
"Tell me
We are not alone in this world
Fighting against the wind~"

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:iconpycckuucommi:
grrreat job on it :) I love it!

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Changing into something less than human, no longer part of this machine.

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:iconfalconfemme:
A wonderful poem for a wonderful work of art it all fits, Awesome Job!:floating:
:icononlymollyknows:
The poem's a bit hard to read because the lines are so long, but I agree with everyone that the picture is gorgeous!

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Beware of airborne oranges.
Peace the f*** out (apologies Mr Healy and Mr Bombus)
Hail Dougness
Hail Jonesy
Love yer bruvvas on a Saturday night :iconblur-club:

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October 18, 2003
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